Saturday, October 20, 2012

An Annotation (The Waste Land, Part 3 of 5)

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P.  The River Thames: A song by the waters

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III.  The Fire Sermon 75

The river's tent is broken; the last fingers of leaf
Clutch and sink into the wet bank.  The wind
Crosses the brown land, unheard.  The nymphs are departed.  -------------175
Sweet Thames, run softly, till I end my song.76
The river bears no empty bottles, sandwich papers,
Silk handkerchiefs, cardboard boxes, cigarette ends
Or other testimony of summer nights.  The nymphs are departed.
And their friends, the loitering heirs of City directors;  ---------------------------180
Departed, have left no addresses.
By the waters of Leman I sat down and wept... 77
Sweet Thames, run softly till I end my song,
Sweet Thames, run softly, for I speak not loud or long.


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75  Buddha’s Fire Sermon is explained in Eliot’s note at line 308.  The fire section will consider healing by a purging of emotions, but first the dying words of the last "air" section evolve into a series of songs.

76 V. Edmund Spenser, Prothalamion (1596): “Calm was the day, and through the trembling air / Sweet breathing Zephyrus did softly play,  ...Sweet Thames, run softly, till I end my song...”  This is a double marriage poem, in which the two brides are attended by river nymphs; compare the songs of the Thames-daughter nymphs beginning at line 266.  See also the deadly appearance of Zephyrus, the wind, in the story of the Hyacinth Prince at line 36.

77 Psalm 137: 1,4 (RSV): “By the rivers of Babylon, there we sat and wept ...How can we sing the songs of the LORD while in a foreign land?”  Lac Leman is an alternative name for Lake Geneva, Switzerland, where Eliot received treatment for mental exhaustion in 1921-22.  See also the lament of a monster conceived in Geneva in Mary Shelley, Frankenstein, or the Modern Prometheus (1818): “I was a poor, helpless, miserable wretch; I knew, and could distinguish, nothing; but, feeling pain invade me on all sides, I sat down and wept.”  See also Jean-Jacques Rousseau, Confessions, Book IV (1782), tr. Angela Scholar (2000): “The sight of Lake Geneva and its admirable shores has always held a particular charm for me...  During the walk to Vevey, I abandoned myself, as I walked along those lovely shores, to thoughts of the sweetest melancholy. ...I was moved to tenderness, I sighed, I wept like a child.  How many times, stopping to weep at my leisure, did I not, perched on a boulder, smile to see my tears mingling with the waters.””  Finally, see Matthew 26:75, in which Peter wept bitterly after betraying Jesus (see note 146).  All of this is brought together by the prevailing allusion of this passage, that of Fisher King sitting on a river bank, a motif that is repeated throughout the poem (see lines 182-189, 263, 298 and 425, and notes 2, 32, 35, 94 and 157).


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Q.   At the River’s Edge: A rattling sound

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But at my back in a cold blast I hear 78 ---------------------------185
The rattle of the bones, 79 and chuckle spread from ear to ear.
A rat crept softly through the vegetation
Dragging its slimy belly on the bank
While I was fishing in the dull canal
On a winter evening round behind the gashouse  ---------------------------190
Musing upon the king my brother's wreck
And on the king my father's death before him. 80
White bodies naked on the low damp ground
And bones cast in a little low dry garret,
Rattled by the rat's foot only, year to year. ---------------------------195


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78 Andrew Marvell, To His Coy Mistress (1655): “For, Lady, you deserve this state, / Nor would I love at lower rate. / But at my back I always hear / Time's wingèd chariot hurrying near; / And yonder all before us lie / Deserts of vast eternity.”  See also line 199. 

79 Ezekiel 37:1-14, The Valley of the Dry Bones  (NIV): “The hand of the LORD was upon me, and he brought me out by the Spirit of the LORD and set me in the middle of a valley; it was full of bones. He led me back and forth among them, and I saw a great many bones on the floor of the valley, bones that were very dry. He asked me, ‘Son of man, can these bones live?’ I said, ‘O Sovereign LORD, you alone know.’ Then he said to me, ‘Prophesy to these bones and say to them, “Dry bones, hear the word of the LORD! This is what the Sovereign LORD says to these bones: I will make breath enter you, and you will come to life. I will attach tendons to you and make flesh come upon you and cover you with skin; I will put breath in you, and you will come to life. Then you will know that I am the LORD.”’ So I prophesied as I was commanded. And as I was prophesying, there was a noise, a rattling sound, and the bones came together, bone to bone.  I looked, and tendons and flesh appeared on them and skin covered them, but there was no breath in them. Then he said to me, ‘Prophesy to the breath; prophesy, son of man, and say to it, “This is what the Sovereign LORD says: Come from the four winds, O breath, and breathe into these slain, that they may live.”’ So I prophesied as he commanded me, and breath entered them; they came to life and stood up on their feet--a vast army. Then he said to me: ‘Son of man, these bones are the whole house of Israel. They say, “Our bones are dried up and our hope is gone; we are cut off.” Therefore prophesy and say to them: “This is what the Sovereign LORD says: O my people, I am going to open your graves and bring you up from them; I will bring you back to the land of Israel. Then you, my people, will know that I am the LORD,when I open your graves and bring you up from them.  I will put my Spirit in you and you will live, and I will settle you in your own land.”’”  The rattling bone motif recurs throughout the poem; see lines 22, 116, 186, 198, 316 and 391.

80 Cf. The Tempest, I. ii.552-553, “FERDINAND: ...Sitting on a bank / weeping again the king my father's wreck’” See also note 33.

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R.  Voices in the Dome: Nightingale songs

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But at my back from time to time I hear 81
The sound of horns and motors, which shall bring
Sweeney 82 to Mrs. Porter in the spring. 83
O the moon shone bright on Mrs. Porter 84
And on her daughter  ---------------------------200
They wash their feet in soda water
Et O ces voix d'enfants, chantant dans la coupole! 85

Twit twit twit
Jug jug jug jug jug jug
So rudely forc'd.  ---------------------------205
Tereu 86

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81 Cf. Marvell, To His Coy Mistress.  See note 78 and line 185.  Marvell’s Coy Mistress is also the source of the line “There will be time,” a recurring allusion in Eliot’s Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock (1915).

82 Sweeney is a brutish character Eliot used in three earlier poems, a counterpart to his more sensitive J. Alfred Prufrock.  The allusion here is indirect.  See Sweeney Among the Nightingales (1918), which opens with Agamemnon’s dying words induced by his wife, from Aeschylus, Agamemnon (458 BC), then concludes: “The nightingales are singing near / The Convent of the Sacred Heart, / And sang within the bloody wood / When Agamemnon cried aloud / And let their liquid droppings fall / To stain the stiff dishonoured shroud.”  See also Sophocles, Electra (ca. 400 BC), in which Agamemnon incurs the wrath of the wood goddess Artemis, and then compare this to the Ovidian tale of Actaeon and Diana (see note 83).

83 Cf. John Day, Parliament of Bees (1616): “When of the sudden, listening, you shall hear, / A noise of horns and hunting, which shall bring / Actaeon to Diana in the spring, / Where all shall see her naked skin...”  See Ovid, Metamorphoses iii.131.  After Actaeon the hunter saw the goddess Diana naked, she turned him into a stag to be hunted and killed by his own dogs.  .

84 I do not know the origin of the ballad from which these lines are taken: it was reported to me from Sydney, Australia.  Soldier’s ballad, “O the moon shines bright on Mrs. Porter / And on the daughter / Of Mrs. Porter / And they wash their feet in soda water / And so they oughter / To keep them clean.” See also Thurland Chattaway, Red Wing (1907): “Now the moon shines bright on pretty red-wing / the breeze is sighing / the nightbird’s crying.”  Nightbirds, or nightingales, are prostitutes.  According to C. M. Bowra, The Creative Experiment (1949), Mrs. Porter was the madame of a wartime brothel in Cairo that was a favorite among Australian troops.

85 V. Paul Verlaine, Parsifal (1886): “And oh, those children’s voices, singing in the dome!”  Parcifal, subject of a Wagner opera and the chief knight of the Grail legend, has just “healed the king, is king now in his turn.”

86 Cf. Pt. II, l. 101, 104, Tereus’s rape of Philomela.

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S.  The Smyrna Merchant : An invitation

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Unreal City
Under the brown fog of a winter noon 87
Mr. Eugenides, the Smyrna merchant 88
Unshaven, with a pocket full of currants  ---------------------------210
C.i.f. London: documents at sight, 89
Asked me in demotic French 90
To luncheon at the Cannon Street Hotel
Followed by a weekend at the Metropole. 91

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87 Compare line 61, which presented the brown fog of a winter dawn.  Time is not linear in this poem, and memories are fragmented.

88 The name “Eugenides” suggests one who is well-bred, but the image of Mr Eugenides in this scene as an unshaven, demotic London currant seller is unmitigatedly negative.  His no-credit sales (see note 89) suggest a lack of trust; he chooses to speak a base version of French (see note 90) instead of the Turkish or Greek of his native Smyrna or the English of his clientele; and he operates within the prevailing brown fog of an unreal city.  Even the product he sells, small dried grapes, are far from what one would hope to find in a healing holy grail.  Beyond this passage, there is more disparity: he was marked as the “one-eyed” merchant in the Tarot deck (see note 37) and his invitation directly follows a reminder of Philomela’s rape (see note 86), an event about which the victim could only relate through woven tapestry and a memory which, in this fire section, the poet is trying hard to purge.  But the merchant is also associated with victims, identified as one who “melts into” the sailor who has drowned and lost his looks and stature (see note 92 and lines 312-322), while the sailor in turn is identified with the drowned hyacinth girl (see note 64).  This ambiguity of identity will culminate in the next scene, featuring the androgynous blind observer Tiresius (see note 92).

89 The currants were quoted at a price ‘carriage and insurance free to London’; and the Bill of Lading, etc., were to be handed to the buyer upon payment of the sight draft.  In other words, shipping costs were built in to the price, which was expected to be paid on delivery.  Currants also appear in Walt Whitman, Leaves of Grass: These, I, Singing in Spring (1900), among wild plants being “collect[ed] for lovers” as “the token of comrades”: “Collecting, I traverse the garden, the world—but soon I pass the gates, / Now along the pond-side—now wading in a little, fearing not the wet.”  Compare this to the "weedy trophies" that Ophelia reached for at her death (see note 74).

90 Demotic means common, of the people.  Demotic and demobbed (line 139) were the two specific words Ezra Pound had suggested to improve the poem, but he would also have broader edits that would dramatically cut the length of the poem.  For instance, Pound encouraged Eliot to remove a whole section from the beginning of an earlier draft of this poem, which Eliot would ultimately present separately as Gerontion (1920).  See also note 73.

91 The Cannon Street Hotel was a hotel frequented by business commuters to and from the Continent, and also known as a homosexual rendezvous; the Metropole was a luxury resort hotel on England’s southern coast.

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T.  Tiresius: The blind spectator

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At the violet hour, when the eyes and back  ---------------------------215
Turn upward from the desk, when the human engine waits
Like a taxi throbbing waiting,
I Tiresias, though blind, throbbing between two lives, 92
Old man with wrinkled female breasts, can see 93

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92 Ovid, Metamorphoses (AD 8, translated by A. S. Kline): Tiresias, although a mere spectator and not indeed a 'character', is yet the most important personage in the poem, uniting all the rest. Just as the one-eyed merchant, seller of currants, melts into the Phoenician Sailor, and the latter is not wholly distinct from Ferdinand Prince of Naples, so all the women are one woman, and the two sexes meet in Tiresias. What Tiresias sees, in fact, is the substance of the poem. The whole passage from Ovid is of great anthropological interest:   Cum Iunone iocos et 'maior vestra profecto est / Quam, quae contingit maribus', dixisse, 'voluptas.' / Illa negat; placuit quae sit sententia docti / Quaerere Tiresiae: venus huic erat utraque nota. / Nam duo magnorum viridi coeuntia silva / Corpora serpentum baculi violaverat ictu / Deque viro factus, mirabile, femina septem / Egerat autumnos; octavo rursus eosdem / Vidit et 'est vestrae si tanta potentia plagae', / Dixit 'ut auctoris sortem in contraria mutet, / Nunc quoque vos feriam!' percussis anguibus isdem / Forma prior rediit genetivaque venit imago. / Arbiter hic igitur sumptus de lite iocosa / Dicta Iovis firmat; gravius Saturnia iusto / Nec pro materia fertur doluisse suique / Iudicis aeterna damnavit lumina nocte, / At pater omnipotens (neque enim licet inrita cuiquam / Facta dei fecisse deo) pro lumine adempto / Scire futura dedit poenamque levavit honore.  (The Judgment of Tiresias, Book III, Lines 316 -338: “. . . they say that Jupiter, expansive with wine, set aside his onerous duties, and relaxing, exchanging pleasantries, with Juno, said ‘ You gain more than we do from the pleasures of love.’ She denied it. They agreed to ask learned Tiresias for his opinion. He had known Venus in both ways.---- Once, with a blow of his stick, he had disturbed two large snakes mating in the green forest, and, marvellous to tell, he was changed from a man to a woman, and lived as such for seven years. In the eighth year he saw the same snakes again and said ‘Since there is such power in plaguing you that it changes the giver of a blow to the opposite sex, I will strike you again, now.’ He struck the snakes and regained his former shape, and returned to the sex he was born with.—  As the arbiter of the light-hearted dispute he confirmed Jupiter’s words. Saturnia, it is said, was more deeply upset than was justified and than the dispute warranted, and damned the one who had made the judgement to eternal night. But, since no god has the right to void what another god has done, the all-powerful father of the gods gave Tiresias knowledge of the future, in exchange for his lost sight, and lightened the punishment with honour.”)

93 Compare Madame Sosostris, who is one who ostensibly can see (a “clairvoyant”) but is nonetheless blind (see note 38); the one-eyed merchant with a blank card (see notes 37 and 38); and the Phoenician sailor, whose eyes in death become pearls (see note 33).

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U.  The Sailor and the Typist : What Tiresius perceived

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At the violet hour, the evening hour that strives  ---------------------------220
Homeward, and brings the sailor home from sea, 94
The typist home at teatime, clears her breakfast, lights
Her stove, and lays out food in tins. 95
Out of the window perilously spread
Her drying combinations touched by the sun's last rays,  ----------------------225
On the divan are piled (at night her bed)
Stockings, slippers, camisoles, and stays. 96
I Tiresias, old man with wrinkled dugs
Perceived the scene, and foretold the rest —
I too awaited the expected guest.  ---------------------------230
He, the young man carbuncular, arrives,
A small house agent's clerk, with one bold stare, 97
One of the low on whom assurance sits
As a silk hat on a Bradford millionaire. 98
The time is now propitious, as he guesses,  ---------------------------235
The meal is ended, she is bored and tired,
Endeavours to engage her in caresses
Which are still unreproved, if undesired.
Flushed and decided, he assaults at once; 99
Exploring hands encounter no defence;  ---------------------------240
His vanity requires no response,
And makes a welcome of indifference.

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94 Sappho, fragment 95 (ca. 600 BC, tr. Henry Thornton Wharton, 1895): “Evening, thou that bringest all that bright morning scattered; thou bringest the sheep, the goat, the child back to her mother.” This may not appear as exact as Sappho's lines, but I had in mind the 'longshore' or 'dory' fisherman, who returns at nightfall.   See also Robert Louis Stevenson, Requiem (1879): “Home is the sailor, home from the sea.”

95 Compare the story of Lil the housewife and Albert the sailor home from sea (note 69).  Contrast the drowned Phoenician Sailor (section 4).

96 Combinations are undergarments; stays are corsets.  Compare the hyacinth girl with hair and clothes in need of drying (note 25); contrast Cleopatra’s chambers (note 54).

97 Carbuncular: Pimpled. The expected guest is now a house clerk or a typist home at teatime; compare the Smyrna merchant’s lunchguest (note 89).

98 Bradford was an English manufacturing town, reputed for producing the nouveax rich.  Compare the socialite chess players (note 68); contrast Marie in Munich (note 15).

99 See Tereus (note 57), and the unresponsive indifference of the “nothing” man (line 61).

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V.  Afterwords : Song of the vicar

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(And I Tiresias have foresuffered all
Enacted on this same divan or bed;
I who have sat by Thebes below the wall  ---------------------------245
And walked among the lowest of the dead.) 100
Bestows one final patronising kiss,
And gropes his way, finding the stairs unlit... 101

She turns and looks a moment in the glass,
Hardly aware of her departed lover;  ---------------------------250
Her brain allows one half-formed thought to pass:
“Well now that's done: and I'm glad it's over.”
When lovely woman stoops to folly and 102
Paces about her room again, alone,
She smoothes her hair with automatic hand,  ---------------------------255
And puts a record on the gramophone. 103

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100 Besides Metamorphoses (see note 90), Tiresius also appears in Homer, Oddysey, 489-493 (ca. 800 BC), tr. Richmond Lattimore, where Circe speaks to Oddyseus: “You shall no longer stay in my house when none of you wish to; but first there is another journey you must accomplish and reach the house of Hades and revered Persephone, there to consult with the soul of Tiresias the Theban, the blind prophet, whose senses stay unshaken within him...”; in Sophocles, Oedipus Rex (429 BC), tr. Robert Fagles, 468-474, where Tiresius curses Oedipus: “So, you mock my blindness? Let me tell you this. You with your precious eyes, you're blind to the corruption of your life, to the house you live in, those you live with-who are your parents? Do you know? All unknowing you are the scourge of your own flesh and blood, the dead below the earth and the living here above”; in Sophocles, Antigone, 5, 79-83 (441 BC), tr. Dudley Fitz and Robert Fitzgerald, where Tiresius rails against King Creon for threatening to bury his niece Antigone alive: “And curses will be hurled at you from far / Cities grieving for sons unburied, left to rot / Before the walls of Thebes”; and in Inferno, XX, 37-42, where Tiresius, being one who sees the future, is consigned to walk backwards in the eighth circle of hell.

101 Tiresius is an observer, yet he also “enacted” the scene and, being blind, “gropes his way” out of the room.

102 V. Oliver Goldsmith, the song in The Vicar of Wakefield., Ch. 24 (1766): “When lovely woman stoops to folly, / And finds too late that men betray, / What charm can soothe her melancholy, / What art can wash her guilt away? // The only art her guilt to cover, / To hide her shame from every eye, / To give repentance to her lover / And wring his bosom, is—to die.”

103 Compare Mrs. Equitone (note 41).

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W.  The “Sometimes” Music : Ariel’s song

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“This music crept by me upon the waters” 104
And along the Strand, up Queen Victoria Street. 105
O City city, 106 I can sometimes hear
Beside a public bar in Lower Thames Street, 107  ---------------------------260
The pleasant whining of a mandoline
And a clatter and a chatter from within
Where fishmen lounge at noon: 108 where the walls
Of Magnus Martyr hold 109
Inexplicable splendour of Ionian white and gold.  ---------------------------265

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104 V. Shakespeare, The Tempest, as above.  I, ii, 462 (1611): “FERDINAND: ‘This music crept by me upon the waters.’”  See also note 33.

105 The Strand is a riverside London street once lined with mansions, almost all of which no longer exist.  Eliot also alluded to the Strand in one of his earliest poems, untitled but commonly known as At Graduation (1905): “Standing upon the shore of all we know / We linger for a moment doubtfully, / Then with a song upon our lips, sail we / Across the harbor bar—  no chart to show / No light to warn of rocks that lie below, / But let us yet put forth courageously. // As colonists embarking from the strand / To seek their fortunes on some foreign shore / Well now they lose what time shall not restore, / And when they leave they fully understand / That though again they see their fatherland / They there shall be as citizens no more.”

106 A tale of two cities: the Unreal City (see line 60) is now simultaneously presented as an ordinary, uncapitalized city.  

107 Eliot worked as a clerk at Lloyd’s Bank from 1917 to 1926, initially as a “stopgap” to make ends meet, but then continuing for four years after The Waste Lane was published.  Most of the streets referenced here and earlier (see lines 60-68) are in the neighborhood of Lloyd’s Bank, in London’s central financial district.

108 It is noon again (see line 208); but again, time is not linear: this follows Tiresuis’s scene in the violet evening hour (see lines 215, 220) and this may be a different noon.

109 The interior of St. Magnus Martyr is to my mind one of the finest among Wren's interiors. See The Proposed Demolition of Nineteen City Churches (P. S. King & Son, Ltd.).  Compare the earlier description of London, with brown fog and the dead sound emanating from Saint Mary Woolnoth Church  (see note 46).  Even in this later passage, the “inexplicable splendour” of the church is between pubs and fish on one side and oil and tar (line 268) on the other, but now Eliot not only notices the splendor of the church but also sometimes hears the music of the street and the pleasantness of the whining and clatter and chatter.   

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X.  Wagner’s Twilight : Song of the Thames-daughters

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The river sweats 110
Oil and tar
The barges drift 111
With the turning tide
Red sails  ---------------------------270
Wide
To leeward, swing on the heavy spar.
The barges wash
Drifting logs
Down Greenwich reach  ---------------------------275
Past the Isle of Dogs. 112
Weialala leia
Wallala leialala


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110 The Song of the (three) Thames-daughters begins here. From line 292 to 306 inclusive they speak in turn. V. Wagner, Götterdammerung, III. I (Twilight of the Gods, 1876).  The name of the Thames-daughters was inspired by Spenser’s Prothalamion (see note 76): “There, in a meadow, by the river's side, / A flock of nymphs I chanced to espy, / All lovely daughters of the flood thereby...,” but their song is derived from that of the Rhinemaidens in Wagner’s Ring Cycle opera.  Direct quotes to the opera are limited to the several melody lines, “Weialala leia, Wallala leialala” (lines 277-278) and the more terse “la la”(line 306) but Eliot also references gold forging (lines 282-284) and assimilates Wagner’s dimetric pace and leisurely tone, which stand in contrast to the song’s grimmer content (lines 266 - 289).   We can also see some of the curse motif of the Grail legend in the Rhinemaidens’ song: “From the Rhine's gold / the ring was wrought. / He who cunningly fashioned it / and ignominiously lost it / laid on it a curse / into all eternity / to doom to death / whoever wears it. ...if you do not restore the ring to us / to hide it deep in the Rhine. / Only its waters / can wash away the curse!”

111 Conrad, Heart of Darkness: “The sea-reach of the Thames stretched before us like the beginning of an interminable waterway. In the offing the sea and the sky were welded together without a joint, and in the luminous space the tanned sails of the barges drifting up with the tide seemed to stand still in red clusters of canvas sharply peaked, with gleams of varnished sprits.”  See also line 41.

112 Greenwich Reach is a straight section of the Thames at the southern banks of the Isle of Dogs, at London’s East End just north of Greenwich.  The Isle of Dogs, once an island, is now a peninsula at one of the larger meanders in the Thames River.  Queen Elizabeth’s royal dogs were once kenneled here, and it was also the site of Placentia Palace where the Privy Council once met.  In 1597, Ben Jonson and Thomas Nashe wrote a satirical play called The Isle of Dogs, which allegedly offended Queen Elizabeth I and crossed lines of propriety to the point that Jonson and two other actors were arrested, all copies of the play were destroyed and the matter was referred to the Privy Council.  Jonson spent three months in prison and public plays were banned for the rest of the summer.

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Y.  Elizabeth and Leicester : A rendezvous

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Elizabeth and Leicester 113
Beating oars 114  ---------------------------280
The stern was formed
A gilded shell
Red and gold 115
The brisk swell
Rippled both shores  ---------------------------285
Southwest wind
Carried down stream
The peal of bells
White towers 116
Weialala leia  ---------------------------290
Wallala leialala

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113 James Anthony Froude, The Reign of Elizabeth, vol. I, ch. iv, 1561 letter of Spanish Ambassador De Quadra to Philip of Spain (1911): “In the afternoon we were in a barge, watching the games on the river. (The queen) was alone with Lord Robert and myself on the poop, when they began to talk nonsense, and went so far that Lord Robert at last said, as I was on the spot there was no reason why they should not be married if the queen pleased.”  This letter supported rumors that Elizabeth I, the Virgin Queen, and Lord Robert Dudley, later the Earl of Leicester, were lovers who would rendezvous at the Queen’s home in Greenwich, past the Isle of Dogs.  A year before the Ambassador’s letter, Lord Robert’s first wife had died from a fall down a flight of stairs.  The coroner officially ruled her death an accident, but rumors persisted that he had arranged for her death in order to be free to marry the Queen, which because of the scandal could never happen.  They remained affectionate, and four years after the accident the Queen even raised his position to Earl of Leicester, but she never did marry Lord Robert or anyone else, and Lord Robert did not remarry for eighteen years.

114 Compare line 422: “the boat responded / Gaily, ...with sail and oar” and, in a calm sea, the “heart would have responded / Gaily ...beating obedient.”

115 Red and gold are the colors of the Spanish flag.  In 1588, the Earl of Leicester defended the Thames to keep the Spanish Armada from advancing towards London.  See also the “burnished throne of Cleopatra’s barge (line 77) and “Ionian white and gold” on the walls of Magnus Martyr (lines 263-264).

116 The peal of bells and white towers suggest the festive trappings of a wedding, forever out of reach for Elizabeth and Leicester; bells also characterize the Tower of London and St Paul’s Cathedral, which were white before taking on the dinge of time, pollution and war.  See also lines 383-384: “...towers tolling reminiscent bells.”

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Z.  Three Sisters : The river song, concluded

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“Trams and dusty trees. 117
Highbury bore me.  Richmond and Kew 118
Undid me. By Richmond I raised my knees
Supine on the floor of a narrow canoe.”  ---------------------------295

“My feet are at Moorgate 119 and my heart
Under my feet.  After the event
He wept.  He promised ‘a new start.’ 120
I made no comment.  What should I resent?”

“On Margate Sands. 121   ---------------------------300
I can connect
Nothing with nothing.
The broken fingernails of dirty hands.
My people humble people who expect
Nothing.” 122       ---------------------------305
la la

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117 See Eliot’s introduction to the song of the Thames-daughters at note 110.  Each of the three singers relates a loss of virginity, each one having a different perspective.  

118 Cf. Dante, Purgatorio, V. 133: 'Ricorditi di me, che son la Pia; / Siena mi fe', disfecemi Maremma.': “...Sienna gave me life; / Maremma took it from me.” Highbury, Richmond and Kew are London neighborhoods along the River Thames.

119 Moorgate is an Underground station in London’s financial district.  “He wept” repeats the convalescent’s lament in line 182 (see note 77), though it may also refer to Jesus weeping after the event of Lazarus’s death (see John 11:35).

120 Compare Eliot’s later poems in Four Quartets (1943).  From East Coker: “Trying to use words, and every attempt / Is a wholy new start, and a different kind of failure,” and from Little Gidding: “Every phrase and every sentence is an end and a beginning, / Every poem an epitaph.”

121 Margate is the southern England coastal town where Eliot spent time in the fall of 1921 for recuperation after suffering from mental exhaustion.  He followed this with more formal treatment in Switzerland (See line 182).

122 Conrad, Heart of Darkness, Ch. 3: “They are simple people – and I want nothing.” See also the nothingness of the wind under the door (line 120).  Also compare the brokenness of heaped images (line 22), the river’s tent (line 173), the seals of empty rooms (line 409) and Coriolanus (line 417). 

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AA.  Buddha’s Fire Sermon : A singing cauldron

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To Carthage then I came 123

Burning burning burning burning 124
O Lord Thou pluckest me out 125
 Lord Thou pluckest  ---------------------------310

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123 V. St. Augustine's Confessions, Book III, Chapter 1 (398 AD) : 'to Carthage then I came, where a cauldron of unholy loves sang all about mine ears'.  See also notes 12, 49 and 55.

124 The complete text of the Buddha's Fire Sermon, Adittapariyaya Sutta, Samyutta Nikaya 35.28 (483 BC) (which corresponds in importance to the Sermon on the Mount (see below)) from which these words are taken, will be found translated in the late Henry Clarke Warren's Buddhism in Translation (Harvard Oriental Series) Ch. 4, Sec. 73 (1896). Mr. Warren was one of the great pioneers of Buddhist studies in the Occident.  “The eye, O priests, is on fire; forms are on fire; eye-consciousness is on fire; impressions received by the eye are on fire; and whatever sensation, pleasant, unpleasant, or indifferent, originates in dependence on impressions received by the eye, that also is on fire.  And with what are these on fire?  With the fire of passions, say I, with the fire of hatred, with the fire of infatuation, with birth, old age, death, sorrow, lamentation, misery, grief, and despair are they on fire. ...Perceiving this, O priests, the learned and noble disciple conceives an aversion for the eye, conceives an aversion for forms, conceives an aversion for eye-consciousness, conceives an aversion for the impressions received by the eye; and whatever sensation, pleasant, unpleasant, or indifferent, originates in dependence on impressions received by the eye, for that also he conceives an aversion. ...And in conceiving this aversion, he becomes divested of passion, and by the absence of passion he becomes free, and when he is free he becomes aware that he is free; and he knows that rebirth is exhausted, that he, has lived the holy life, that he has done what it behooved him to do, and that he is no more for this world.”  Compare this to the Sermon on the Mount, Matthew 5:14-16 and 6:22-23 (NIV): “You are the light of the world. A town built on a hill cannot be hidden. Neither do people light a lamp and put it under a bowl. Instead they put it on its stand, and it gives light to everyone in the house.  ...The eye is the lamp of the body. If your eyes are healthy, your whole body will be full of light. But if your eyes are unhealthy, your whole body will be full of darkness. If then the light within you is darkness, how great is that darkness!”

125 From St. Augustine's Confessions again, Book X. The collocation of these two representatives of eastern and western asceticism, as the culmination of this part of the poem, is not an accident.  “And I, though I speak and see this, entangle my steps with these outward beauties; but Thou pluckest me out, O Lord, Thou pluckest me out; because Thy loving-kindness is before my eyes. For I am taken miserably, and Thou pluckest me out mercifully; sometimes not perceiving it, when I had but lightly lighted upon them; otherwhiles with pain, because I had stuck fast in them.”


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Sunday, October 14, 2012

reifying what is 'melted into air'

Josef this week delivered a decent presentation, by adumbrated accounts, on St Petersburg the city and how it necessarily factors into Russian history--the perennial unit designated to Czech 8th graders, perchance. I didn't over-coach him (believe it or not!) but did push by fingertips a volume by Marshall Berman entitled All That's Solid Melts Into Air.

Berman's title comes from Shakespeare's final, second-most-personal play, The Tempest. Maybe it is his most personal, being the only one without a precursor plot, but we'd be remiss to discount the ineffable relation of the fictional dead father (Hamlet Sr) speaking to his living son (Hamlet Jr) when we have extant non-fictional evidence of the living father (William) speaking to his dead son (Hamnet). If it's not too hyperbolic to suggest here on Stillwater Symposium, I think that very relational crossroads is at the core of what we are on earth to do.

Simorgh Press is set to publish the need for modern annotations of Eliot's work, and I hope we'll all read and advise with that in mind. For those of us who play chess, for instance, we should bear in mind the deep tradition of those exponential squares. Most of us haven't been in "rat's alley", but all the more reason to put ourselves there, even for the mental exercise. Shakespeare did. He lost his son Hamnet due to the Bubonic Plague.

I wanted to write a poem as an interstice in Jon's 5-part installment about what Eliot coined as 'objective correlative'. This should have been easy: I teach literature very much out of what University of Chicago influenced in the 1920's as 'New Criticism', considering the text first-and-foremost as artifact and objective reality. I thought of what a kindergarten teacher might think as pupils performed their 'show-and-tell' and became predictably distracted by Dr Suess's 'bloogs blowing by'... I don't know what kindergarteners or their teachers think. I don't really know what the objective correlative means in layman's terms....

Which leads me to the title of this post, and my paltry effort to reify anything in this effervescent week. Lyuba Krasna was buried yesterday, in a beautiful funeral fitting all things we hold fast to. Her husband Libor crossed himself meaningfully as he said one of his innumerable good-byes. My own poem on the event is not suitable as an elegy; it objectively records what I (why I?) was thinking in the minutes of another runner's fateful passage. You can view it through a couple filters at my school blog  One student, by chance, took up the theme and waxed poetical about Ophelia, even though he'd studied her last year and hasn't any practical need to resurrect her theme for any possible exam, college-entrance or otherwise.

It's October, my indisputably favorite month, and the Cardinals are still playing strong. I'm looking forward to holidays:  in Venice to greet the new year, in Prague's spring to enjoy Kirsten's music, in Hatton this July to reify the bedrock of Vold reunions. God bless the solid earth that allows us to "rejoice with those who rejoice and mourn with those who mourn" (Romans 12:15).

Dan

Saturday, October 13, 2012

An Annotation (The Waste Land, Part 2 of 5)


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J.  Cleopatra’s Chambers : Stirred by the air

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II.  A Game of Chess 53

The Chair she sat in, like a burnished throne, 54
Glowed on the marble, where the glass
Held up by standards wrought with fruited vines
From which a golden Cupidon peeped out  ---------------------------80
(Another hid his eyes behind his wing)
Doubled the flames of sevenbranched candelabra
Reflecting light upon the table as
The glitter of her jewels rose to meet it,
From satin cases poured in rich profusion.  ---------------------------85
In vials of ivory and coloured glass
Unstoppered, lurked her strange synthetic perfumes,
Unguent, powdered, or liquid — troubled, confused
And drowned the sense in odours; stirred by the air
That freshened from the window, these ascended  ---------------------------90
In fattening the prolonged candle-flames,
Flung their smoke into the laquearia, 55
Stirring the pattern on the coffered ceiling.

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53 Thomas Middleton, A Game at Chess 1624); and see also Middleton, Women Beware Women (1657), in which a girl is seduced while her mother in law is kept busy in the next room playing chess.  This is the “air” section, in which all the speakers – walls that talk, a husband and wife, Hamlet and Ophelia, a bartender and a maid  – utter dying words.  See The Tempest, Ibid., IV, i, 148-158: “PROSPERO: ‘Our revels now are ended. These our actors / (As I foretold you) were all spirits, and / Are melted into air, into thin air, / And like the baseless fabric of this vision, / The cloud-capp'd tow'rs, the gorgeous palaces, / The solemn temples, the great globe itself, / Yea, all which it inherit, shall dissolve, / And like this insubstantial pageant faded / Leave not a rack behind.’”

54 Cf. Shakespeare, Antony and Cleopatra (1623), II, ii, l. 190: Cleopatra’s boat:The barge she sat in, like a burnish'd throne, / Burn'd on the water: the poop was beaten gold; / Purple the sails, and so perfumed that / The winds were love-sick with them ; the oars were silver, / Which to the tune of flutes kept stroke, and made / The water which they beat to follow faster, / As amorous of their strokes.  ...O'er-picturing that Venus where we see / The fancy outwork nature: on each side her / Stood pretty dimpled boys, like smiling Cupids, / With divers-colour'd fans, whose wind did seem / To glow the delicate cheeks which they did cool, / And what they undid did.”

55 Laquearia. V. Virgil, Aeneid, I. 726 (19 BC): “dependent lychni laquearibus aureis incensi, et noctem flammis funalia vincunt (Blazing torches hang from the gold-panelled ceiling, and torches conquer the night with flames).”  Carthagian Queen Dido’s banquet hall is described.

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K.  Walls That Talk: The rape of Philomela

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Huge sea-wood fed with copper
Burned green and orange, framed by the coloured stone, ---------------------------95
In which sad light a carvèd dolphin swam.
Above the antique mantel was displayed
As though a window gave upon the sylvan scene 56
The change of Philomel, by the barbarous king 57
So rudely forced; yet there the nightingale 58  ---------------------------100
Filled all the desert with inviolable voice
And still she cried, and still the world pursues,
“Jug Jug” to dirty ears.
And other withered stumps of time
Were told upon the walls; staring forms  ---------------------------105
Leaned out, leaning, hushing the room enclosed.
Footsteps shuffled on the stair.
Under the firelight, under the brush, her hair
Spread out in fiery points
Glowed into words, then would be savagely still.  ---------------------------110

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56 Sylvan scene. V. John Milton, Paradise Lost, iv. 140 (137-142) (1667).  Satan describes Eden: “...and over head up grew / Insuperable highth of loftiest shade, / Cedar, and Pine, and Firr, and branching Palm / A Silvan Scene, and as the ranks ascend / Shade above shade, a woodie / Theatre Of stateliest view.”

57 V. Ovid, Metamorphoses, vi, Philomela (486-674) (AD 8): Pandion had entrusted his daughter Philomela to her brother in law King Tereus, so that she could visit her sister Procne: “As soon as Philomela was on board the brightly painted ship, and the sea was churned by the oars (see note 54), and the land left behind them, the barbarian king cried ‘I have won! I carry with me what I wished for! ...The king took her to a high-walled building, hidden in an ancient forest (see note 56), and there he locked her away, she, pale and trembling, fearing everything, in tears now, begging to know where her sister was. Then, confessing his evil intent, he overcame her by force, ...she called out, again and again, in vain, to her father, her sister, and most of all to the great gods.‘...If the gods above witness such things, if the powers of heaven mean anything, if all is not lost, as I am, then one day you will pay me for this! I, without shame, will tell what you have done. If I get the chance it will be in front of everyone. If I am kept imprisoned in these woods, I will fill the woods with it, and move the stones, that know of my guilt, to pity.’” This provoked the king to cut off her tongue, but in time she was able to tell Procne what had happened by weaving it into tapestry.  The sisters then took gruesome revenge on Tereus, and thereafter they were all changed into birds, the sisters into a nightingale and a swallow and Tereus into a hoopoe.

58 Cf. Part III, l. 204.  See also John Lyly, Alexander and Campaspe (1584): “‘Jug, jug, jug, jug, tereu,’ she cries, / And still her woes at midnight rise.”

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L.  Husband and Wife: Talking of wind and nothingness

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“My nerves are bad to-night.  Yes, bad.  Stay with me.
“Speak to me.  Why do you never speak.  Speak.
“What are you thinking of? What thinking? What?
“I never know what you are thinking.  Think.”

I think we are in rats' alley 59  ---------------------------115
Where the dead men lost their bones.

“What it that noise?”
The wind under the door. 60
“What is that noise now?  What is the wind doing?”
Nothing again nothing. 61  ---------------------------120
“Do
“You know nothing?  Do you see nothing?  Do you remember
“Nothing?” 62

I remember
Those are pearls that were his eyes.  ---------------------------125
“Are you alive, or not? 63 Is there nothing in your head?” 64

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59 Cf. Part III, l. 194-195. “And bones cast in a little low dry garret, / Rattled by the rat's foot only, year to year.”  Rat’s alley was the World War I slang for battlefield trenches.  See also Part I, Line 22: “...A heap of broken images,” and see note 79.

60 Cf. John Webster, The Devil’s Lawcase, Act 3, scene 2 (1623): “(Second Surgeon:) ‘Is the wind in that door still?’” Two surgeons had just stumbled upon a man being stabbed, ostensibly to death; the surgeons were considering how they might make money off of the perpetrator by selling their silence when the victim groans.  The second surgeon initially denies this, pretending it is only the wind, but he knows better and they quickly conclude that by healing the victim they can get money from both victim and perpetrator.

61 Cf. Part III, lines 301-302: “I can connect / Nothing with nothing.” ”

62 Shakespeare, Hamlet, III. iv. 132-5 (1623): “HAMLET: Do you see nothing there? QUEEN: Nothing at all; yet all that is I see.’ HAMLET: Nor did you nothing hear? QUEEN: No, nothing but ourselves.”

63 Cf. Part I, Lines 39-40: “I was neither / Living nor dead, and I knew nothing...”

64 Cf. Part I, l. 37, 48.  This is Eliot’s hint tying the hyacinth prince (“Yet when we came back, late, from the hyacinth garden, your arms full and your hair wet”) to the drowned sailor (“Those are pearls that were his eyes”).

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M.  Hamlet and the Socialites: Dying words in disguise

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But 65

O O O O that Shakespeherian Rag — 66
It's so elegant
So intelligent 67  ---------------------------130
“What shall I do now?  What shall I do?”
“I shall rush out as I am, and walk the street
“With my hair down, so.  What shall we do tomorrow?
“What shall we ever do?”
The hot water at ten.  ---------------------------135
And if it rains, a closed car at four.
And we shall play a game of chess, 68
Pressing lidless eyes and waiting for a knock upon the door.

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65 The spacing suggests that this line, with the single word “But” set alone and to the right, is more attached to the previous passage, but it serves in any case as an abrupt segue, suggesting that the change of subject is questionable and that the nothingness of the last passage will continue.  Thus this air section remains, with every speaker, a series of dying words.

66 Ibid. Hamlet, V. ii. (Folio edition 3841-3847): “HAMLET: O I dye Horatio: The potent poyson quite ore-crowes my spirit, I cannot liue to heare the Newes from England, But I do prophesie th'election lights On Fortinbras, he ha's my dying voyce, So tell him with the occurrents more and lesse, Which haue solicited. The rest is silence. O, o, o, o.”  This will be followed by some of Ophelia’s last words, spoken at the end of a song; see line 172.

67 Gene Buck & Herman Ruby, The Zeigfield Follies, That Shakespearean Rag (1912): “That Shakesperian rag-- Most intelligent, very elegant,...”  Socialites talk of their day plans in this passage, which is conspicuously placed between the emptiness of a husband and wife’s conversation (lines 111-126) and the barside talk of a soldier’s return to his wife (lines 139-173).  These bits are further interspersed with the subtlest references to dying words of Hamlet and Ophelia, respectively disguised as a rag song chorus and a string of pub farewells at closing time.  The socialites, meanwhile, ultimately decide to play chess and take no notice of the events around them (see note 53).  Eliot would later write in his essay Dante: II. The Purgatorio and the Paradiso (1929): “...Gradually we come to admit that Shakespeare understands a greater extent and variety of human life than Dante; but that Dante understands deeper degrees of degradation and higher degrees of exaltation.  And a further wisdom is reached when we see clearly that this indicates the equality of the two men.”

68 Cf. the game of chess in Thomas Middleton's Women Beware Women.  See note 53.  See also the Tempest, Ibid., V.i., which ends with Ferdinand and Miranda playing chess.

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N.  The Maid’s Story: Lil and Albert

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When Lil's husband got demobbed, I said — 69
I didn't mince my words, I said to her myself,  ---------------------------140
HURRY UP PLEASE IT'S TIME
Now Albert's coming back, make yourself a bit smart.
He'll want to know what you done with that money he gave you
To get herself some teeth.  He did, I was there.
You have them all out, Lil, 70 and get a nice set,  ---------------------------145
He said, I swear, I can't bear to look at you.
And no more can't I, I said, and think of poor Albert,
He's been in the army for four years, he wants a good time,
And if you don't give it him, there's others will, I said.
Oh is there, she said.  Something o' that, I said.  ---------------------------150
Then I'll know who to thank, she said, and give me a straight look.
HURRY UP PLEASE IT'S TIME
If you don't like it you can get on with it, I said.
Others can pick and choose if you can't.
But if Albert makes off, it won't be for a lack of telling.  ---------------------------155
You ought to be ashamed, I said, to look so antique.
(And her only thirty-one.)
I can't help it, she said, pulling a long face,
It's them pills I took, to bring it off, she said. 71
(She's had five already, and nearly died of young George.) -------------------------160
The chemist said it would be all right, but I've never been the same.
You are a proper fool, I said.
Well, if Albert won't leave you alone, there it is, I said,
What you get married for if you don't want children?

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69 To be demobbed, or demobilized, is to be discharged from military service.  According to Valerie Eliot’s notes (see note 73), this story was related to Eliot by their maid.

70 The Alphabet of ben Sira (ca. 700-900 AD): “After God created Adam , who was alone, He said, ‘It is not good for man to be alone.’  He then created a woman for Adam, from the earth, as He had created Adam himself, and called her Lilith. Adam and Lilith began to fight. She said, ‘I will not lie below,’ and he said, ‘I will not lie beneath you, but only on top. For you are fit only to be in the bottom position, while am to be in the superior one.’ Lilith responded, ‘We are equal to each other inasmuch as we were both created from the earth.’ But they would not listen to one another. When Lilith saw this, she pronounced the Ineffable Name and flew away into the air.  ...Said the Holy One to Adam, ‘If she agrees to come back, fine. If not she must permit one hundred of her children to die every day.’”  See also Isaiah 34:9, 10, 13-14 (NRSV): “And the streams of Edom shall be turned into pitch, and her soil into sulfur; her land shall become burning pitch. ...From generation to generation it shall lie waste; ...Thorns shall grow over its strongholds, nettles and thistles in its fortresses. It shall be the haunt of jackals, an abode for ostriches. Wildcats shall meet with hyenas, goat-demons shall call to each other; there too Lilith shall repose, and find a place to rest.”

71 To bring it off is to have an abortion.  See note 70, on Lilith’s punishment.

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O.  Ophelia and the Bartender : More dying words

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HURRY UP PLEASE IT'S TIME 72  ---------------------------165
Well, that Sunday Albert was home, they had a hot gammon, 73
And they asked me in to dinner, to get the beauty of it hot —
HURRY UP PLEASE IT'S TIME
HURRY UP PLEASE IT'S TIME
Goonight Bill.  Goonight Lou.  Goonight May.  Goonight.  ---------------------------170
Ta ta.  Goonight.  Goonight.
Good night, ladies, good night, sweet ladies, good night, good night. 74

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72 “Hurry up please it’s time,” is a common last call in English pubs.  See also line 260, regarding an appreciation for the music that is sometimes heard “beside a public bar.”

73 Gammon is smoked ham; it is also a Greek term for sexual intercourse.  One of Eliot’s more notorious flaws was a streak of anti-Semitism, and while we are largely spared from it in this poem, it bears mentioning how the Lil story, with its Lilith parallel from Jewish mythology, concludes with a pork meal.  The sparing of any extensions of this flaw is thanks in part to Pound’s editing.  For instance, an earlier draft of The Waste Land had contained a reference to a Jewish slur from one of Eliot’s earlier poems, Burbank with a Baedeker: Bleistein with a Cigar (1920), in which Eliot had written “The rats are underneath the piles. / The jew is underneath the lot. / Money in furs.”  Eliot reinserted Bleistein in an early draft of the Waste Land:“Full fathom five your Bleistein lies / Under the flatfish and the squids,” and Pound prevailed in having these lines deleted.  See T. S. Eliot: The Waste Land, a Facsimile & Transcript of the Original Drafts, edited by Valerie Eliot (1971).  See also note 90. 

74 Hamlet, IV. v. 52-54: “OPHELIA: And so I thank you for your good counsel. Come, my coach! Good night, ladies; good night, sweet ladies; good night, good night.”  These are Ophelia’s dying words, if not her last words, and thus ends the air section; Ophelia has a few more lines in the scene, but already the air about her is dying.  She has lost her mind after the death of her father, killed by her fiancé Hamlet, and soon it will be reported that she “fell in the weeping brook” and drowned.  See IV. Vii, 64-81:  QUEEN GERTRUDE: “There is a willow grows aslant a brook, / That shows his hoar leaves in the glassy stream; / There with fantastic garlands did she come / Of crow-flowers, nettles, daisies, and long purples / That liberal shepherds give a grosser name, / But our cold maids do dead men's fingers call them: / There, on the pendent boughs her coronet weeds / Clambering to hang, an envious sliver broke; / When down her weedy trophies and herself / Fell in the weeping brook. Her clothes spread wide; And, mermaid-like, awhile they bore her up: ...but long it could not be / Till that her garments, heavy with their drink, / Pull'd the poor wretch from her melodious lay / To muddy death.”  Ophelia's death is also alluded to by lines 173-174 in the next section (“The river's tent is broken; the last fingers of leaf / Clutch and sink into the wet bank”); by the description of the hyacinth girl in line 38, (“Your arms full, and your hair wet”); by King Ludwig II’s death in shallow waters (see note 10); and by the collected currants in the merchant’s pocket (see note 89).

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Saturday, October 6, 2012

An Annotation, with encouragement by the Reader's Brother (Part 1 of 5)


A.  The Waste Land: Annotated

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The Waste Land 1
by T.S. Eliot (1922) 2   

‘Nam Sibyllam quidem Cumis ego ipse oculis meis vidi in ampulla 
pendere, et cum illi pueri dicerent: Σἰβυλλα τἱ θἐλεις ; respondebat 
illa: ἀποθανεἱν θἑλωa.’ 3

For Ezra Pound
il miglior fabbro. 4

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1 Regular font footnotes are T.S. Eliot’s own endnotes.  Bold-faced notes expand on Eliot’s notes with direct translations and sources.  Italicized notes provide further elaboration and comment.  The headnotes are my own choice of focus for each section.

2 Not only the title, but the plan and a good deal of the incidental symbolism of the poem were suggested by Miss Jessie L. Weston’s book on the Grail legend: From Ritual to Romance (Macmillan) (1920).  Indeed, so deeply am I indebted, Miss Weston’s book will elucidate the difficulties of the poem much better than my notes can do; and I recommend it (apart from the great interest of the book itself) to any who think such elucidation of the poem worth the trouble. To another work of anthropology I am indebted in general, one which has influenced our generation profoundly; I mean James Frazer, The Golden Bough (1890); I have used especially the two volumes Adonis, Attis, Osiris. Anyone who is acquainted with these works will immediately recognize in the poem certain references to vegetation ceremonies.  Weston’s The Quest of the Holy Grail (1913) provides this introductory summary: “In Arthurian legend, a Fisher King (the fish being an ancient symbol of life) has been maimed or killed, and his country has therefore become a dry Waste Land; he can only be regenerated and his land restored to fertility by a knight (Parsifal) who perseveres through various ordeals to the Perilous Chapel and learns the answers to certain ritual questions about the Grail.”  Weston concludes in From Ritual to Romance, Chapter 2, that “the woes of the land are directly dependent upon the sickness, or maiming, of the King, and in no wise caused by the failure of the Quester.”

3 Petronius, Satyricon, ch. 48 (ca. AD 60): “(Trimalchio:) ‘...And then, there's the Sibyl: with my own eyes I saw her, at Cumae, hanging up in a basket; and whenever the boys would say to her “Sibyl, Sibyl, what do you want?” she would answer, “I want to die.”’  Sibyl had been granted eternal life by Apollo but shrivelled up when she failed to ask for eternal youth. 

4 Dante Alighieri, Divine Comedy: Purgatorio 26.117 (ca. 1321): “The better craftsman.” Dante’s tribute to 12th century Provencal poet Arnaut Daniel. 

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B.  Chaucer: A spring pilgrimage

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I.  The Burial of the Dead 5

April is the cruellest month, breeding 6  
Lilacs out of the dead land, mixing 7
Memory and desire, stirring
Dull roots with spring rain.
Winter kept us warm, covering                                         ---------------------------5
Earth in forgetful snow, feeding 8
A little life with dried tubers. 9

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5 The Church of England, The Book of Common Prayer (1662), The Order for the Burial of the Dead. The order of service begins with a passage from John 11: 25-26: “...whosoever liveth and believeth in me, shall never die.”  The five principal characters in this section (Countess Marie, God of the Prophets, the Hyacinth Prince, the Clairvoyante and the Reader’s Brother) each are eager to speak and be heard, but death lingers around them.  

6 Geoffrey Chaucer, The Canterbury Tales, General Prologue, 1-5 (ca. 1372): Whan that Aprille with his shoures soote, / The droghte of March hath perced to the roote, / And bathed every veyne in swich licóur / Of which vertú engendred is the flour; / ...Thanne longen folk to goon on pilgrimages. (When April’s gentle showers have pierced the drought / of March right to the root and bathed each sprout / Through every vein with liquid of such power it brings forth the engendering of the flower ...On pilgrimage then folks desire to start.)”   Chaucer is known as the Father of English Literature, much as Eliot would become known by this poem as the progenitor of modern poetry. More to the point, Chaucer, in Canterbury Tales, and Eliot, in this poem, each are commencing on a pilgrimage with tales to tell along the way, but where Chaucer begins with gentle, sweet rains and the first flowers of spring, Eliot views the end of a mindless winter as cruel and the season ahead as dry and barren; and where Chaucer’s stories are told to pass the time, Eliot’s are painful voices from the past.  And yet the modern pilgrim proceeds, like the medieval seekers of the Holy Grail before him, on a crucial quest for life and healing.

7 Walt Whitman, Leaves of Grass: Memories of President Lincoln (1892): “When lilacs last in the dooryard bloom’d, / And the great star early droop’d in the Western sky in the night, I mourned, and yet shall mourn with ever-returning spring.”

8 This is commonly called the poem’s “earth” section, the first of four sections using the classical elements of earth, air, fire and water as themes; Eliot would later repeat this structure in Four Quartets (1943).  See further explanation of the classical elements at note 130.

9 James Thompson, The City of Dreadful Night (1861): “Our Mother feedeth thus our little life That we in turn may feed her with our death...”

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C.  Melancholy Marie: When we were children

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Summer surprised us, coming over the Starnbergersee 10  
With a shower of rain; we stopped in the colonnade,
And went on in sunlight, into the Hofgarten, 11  ---------------------------10
And drank coffee, and talked for an hour.
Bin gar keine Russin, stamm’ aus Litauen, echt deutsch. 12
And when we were children, 13 staying at the archduke’s,
My cousin’s, he took me out on a sled,
And I was frightened. He said, Marie,         ---------------------------15
Marie, hold on tight. And down we went.
In the mountains, there you feel free. 14
I read, much of the night, and go south in the winter. 15

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10 Starnbergersee is a lake southwest of Munich and the site of the 1886 death of Bavarian King Ludwig II, also known as the Mad King or the Swan King.  He was found dead in shallow waters in 1886; compare this to the death of Ophelia (see note 74).  Ludwig was a dedicated patron of Richard Wagner, whose operas will be referenced several times in this poem.

11 Hofgarten is a Munich park.

12 “I am not Russian, I come from Lithuania, I am really a German.  This statement, an intertwining knot of dried up roots, appears to be an overheard fragment; the speaker is not identified, and in context it seems to be someone other than the poet or his companion, Austrian Countess Marie Larisch, to whom we are just being introduced.  See note 15.  Also compare William Shakespeare, The Tempest, I. ii., 85-86 (1611): “ADRIAN: [to Gonzalo] ‘Widow Dido’ said you? You make me study of that: she was of Carthage, not of Tunis.”  Dido and Carthage will reappear later: see lines 70, 92 and 307.

13 Ecclesiastes 12:1, 5 (NIV) (here and at lines 22-23): “(The Teacher:) ‘...Remember your Creator in the days of your youth, before the days of trouble come and the years approach when you will say, “I find no pleasure in them. ...when men are afraid of heights and of dangers in the streets; when the almond tree blossoms and the grasshopper drags himself along and desire no longer is stirred. Then man goes to his eternal home and mourners go about the streets.’”

14 See also the reference to Himavant, literally a snowy mountain, in Section V, line 398.

15 Marie Larisch, My Past (1913); and private conversations Eliot had with her in Bavaria.  In 1889, Austrian Countess Marie was socially cast out after her cousin Crown-Prince Rudolph (the archduke) and his mistress, for whom Marie had acted as a go-between, died in a suicide-murder scandal.  Rudolph was eventually succeeded as crown-prince by Archduke Franz Ferdinand, whose 1914 assassination triggered World War I, a chief (but not only) cause of the Waste Land that was troubling Eliot as he wrote this poem.  Meanwhile, another Prince Ferdinand, from Shakespeare’s The Tempest, will be given repeated attention, beginning with the next passage.  See note 19.

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D.  God of the Prophets: A separate shadow

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What are the roots that clutch, what branches grow    
Out of this stony rubbish? Son of man, 16  ---------------------------20
You cannot say, or guess, for you know only
A heap of broken images, where the sun beats,
And the dead tree gives no shelter, the cricket no relief, 17
And the dry stone no sound of water. Only
There is shadow under this red rock, 18  ---------------------------25
(Come in under the shadow of this red rock), 19
And I will show you something different from either 20
Your shadow at morning striding behind you
Or your shadow at evening rising to meet you; 21
I will show you fear in a handful of dust. 22         ---------------------------30

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16 Cf. Ezekiel 2:1. (NIV): “[The LORD] said to me, ‘Son of man, stand up on your feet and I will speak to you. See also Ezekiel 37:3: “Son of man, can these bones live?”  The extended “valley of the bones” passage is at note 79.

17 Cf. Ecclesiastes 12:5. See note 13.

18 Isaiah 32:1-2 (NIV): “See, a king will reign in righteousness and rulers will rule with justice.  Each man will be like a shelter from the wind and a refuge from the storm, like streams of water in the desert and the shadow of a great rock in a thirsty land.

19 Shakespeare, The Tempest, I. ii., 537: “ARIEL: ‘Come unto these yellow sands...’”  This is Eliot’s first reference to a passage he would frequently turn to, at lines 26, 38, 48, 125, 191, 257 and 393.  For the extended passage, see note 33.

20 Jeremiah 33: 2-11 (excerpts; NIV): “This is what the LORD says, he who made the earth...: ‘Call to me and I will answer you and tell you great and unsearchable things you do not know. ...You say about this place, “It is a desolate waste, without men or animals.” Yet in the towns of Judah and the streets of Jerusalem that are deserted, inhabited by neither men nor animals, there will be heard once more the sounds of joy and gladness...  For I will restore the fortunes of the land as they were before.’”

21 T.S. Eliot, The Death of Narcissus (1915): “Come in under the shadow of this gray rock, / And I will show you something different from either / Your shadow sprawling over the sand at daybreak, or / Your shadow leaping behind the fire against the red rock...”

22 John Donne, Devotions Upon Emergent Occasions: The Physician Is Sent For (1638): “What’s become of man’s great extent and proportion, when himself shrinks himself and consumes himself to a handful of dust; what’s become of his soaring thoughts, his compassing thoughts, when himself brings himself to the ignorance, to the thoughtlessness, of the grave?”

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E.  The Hyacinth Prince: Remembering

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Frisch weht der Wind
Der Heimat zu
Mein Irisch Kind,
Wo weilest du? 23
“You gave me hyacinths first a year ago;  ---------------------------35
“They called me the hyacinth girl.” 24
—Yet when we came back, late, from the Hyacinth garden,
Your arms full, and your hair wet, 25 I could not
Speak, and my eyes failed, I was neither
Living nor dead, 26 and I knew nothing, 27         ---------------------------40
Looking into the heart of light, the silence. 28
Oed’ und leer das Meer. 29

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23 V. Richard Wagner, Tristan und Isolde, i. 1, verses 5-8. (1865): “Freshly blows the wind to the homeland; my Irish darling, where are you waiting?”  This sailor’s song is overheard by Irish Princess Isolde, en route to her loveless marriage to King Mark of Cornwall; Isolde wants to drink poison to escape her fate, but her maid substitutes the poison with a love potion.  Upon realizing this, she asks Tristan, “Must I live?”  See also Sir Thomas Mallory, Le Morte D-Arthur: The First and Second Books of Sir Tristams de Lione (1485).

24 Ovid, Metamorphosis, X. 162-219 (AD 8): The hyacinth, a perennial April/May wildflower, was named after a Spartan prince endeared by both Apollo, the sun god, and Zephyrus, the wind god.   While playing quoits in the sun the prince was killed by a wind-blown quoit; Apollo raised a purple flower out of his blood, traced a mournful “ai, ai” on its petals and named it Hyacyinth.

25 See Eliot’s note (note 64) at Part 2, line 126, tying the hyacinth garden to the drowned sailor and the recurring allusion from The Tempest.  See also note 74, relating this to Hamlet’s Ophelia.

26 Dante, Purgatorio 26. 117: “I was not dead nor living.”  See also Bhagavat Gita 2:11: “The wise grieve neither for the living nor for the dead.”

27 See Part 2, lines 121-123: “Do / You know nothing?  Do you see nothing?  Do you remember / Nothing?”  See also note 77, citing the lament of Frankenstein’s monster.

28 Joseph Conrad, Heart of Darkness, Ch. 1 (1902), introducing Kurtz, “the only man of us who still followed the sea.”

29 Wagner, Tristan und Isolde Id. iii, verse 24: “(Shepherd:) ‘Old and desolate is the sea.’” This is the shepherd’s report to a mortally wounded Tristan, who waits for Isolde’s ship to arrive. 

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F.  The Clairvoyante: A wicked pack of cards

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Madame Sosostris, famous clairvoyante, 30        
Had a bad cold, 31 nevertheless
Is known to be the wisest woman in Europe,  ---------------------------45
With a wicked pack of cards. 32 Here, said she,
Is your card, the drowned Phoenician Sailor,
(Those are pearls that were his eyes. 33 Look!)

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30 Aldous Huxley, Crome Yellow (1921), Ch. 21: Sesostris is the Sorceress of Ecbatana, a duplicitous man dressed as a woman; the streetwise fraudulence of Sosostris will stand in contrast with the more mythical androgyny of Tiresius (see note 38).

31 John Webster, White Devil (1612): Flamineo’s dying words, in a play about moral corruption: “I have caught / An everlasting cold.  I have lost my voice / Most irrevocably ...Strike, thunder, and strike loud, to my farewell!”

32 Weston (see note 2) saw symbols of the Grail legend in the four Tarot suits and in our modern deck: “Cup (Chalice, or Goblet)--Hearts.  Lance (Wand, or Sceptre)--Diamonds.  Sword--Spades.  Dish (Circles, or Pentangles, the form varies)--Clubs.”  Eliot, by his own acknowledgment, took a more arbitrary license with the Tarot cards:  I am not familiar with the exact constitution of the Tarot pack of cards, from which I have obviously departed to suit my own convenience. The Hanged Man, a member of the traditional pack, fits my purpose in two ways: because he is associated in my mind with the Hanged God of Frazer, and because I associate him with the hooded figure in the passage of the disciples to Emmaus in Part V (see note 39). The Phoenician Sailor (see notes 33 and 40) and the Merchant (see note 37) appear later; also the “crowds of people,” (see note 38) and Death by Water is executed in Part IV (see note 40). The Man with Three Staves (an authentic member of the Tarot pack) I associate, quite arbitrarily, with the Fisher King himself (see notes 2 and 35).

33 Shakespeare, Tempest I. ii. 562: “ARIEL: ‘Those are pearls that were his eyes.”  Compare Shakespeare’s lines 537-565 with Eliot’s references at lines 26, 38, 48, 125, 191, 257 and 393: “ARIEL: ‘Come unto these yellow sands, / And then take hands: / Courtsied when you have and kiss'd / The wild waves whist, / Foot it featly here and there; / And, sweet sprites, the burthen bear. / Hark, hark! / ...The watch-dogs bark! / ...Hark, hark! I hear / The strain of strutting chanticleer / Cry, Cock-a- diddle-dow.” FERDINAND: ‘Where should this music be? i' the air or the earth? / It sounds no more: and sure, it waits upon / Some god o' the island. Sitting on a bank, / Weeping again the king my father's wreck, / This music crept by me upon the waters, / Allaying both their fury and my passion / With its sweet air: thence I have follow'd it, / Or it hath drawn me rather. But 'tis gone. / No, it begins again.’  ARIEL sings: ‘Full fathom five thy father lies; / Of his bones are coral made; / Those are pearls that were his eyes: / Nothing of him that doth fade / But doth suffer a sea-change / Into something rich and strange...’”

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G.  Madame Sosostris: The wicked pack, continued

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Here is Belladonna, the Lady of the Rocks,
The lady of situations. 34             ---------------------------50
Here is the man with three staves, 35 and here the Wheel, 36
And here is the one-eyed merchant, 37 and this card,
Which is blank, is something he carries on his back,
Which I am forbidden to see. 38 I do not find
The Hanged Man. 39  Fear death by water. 40         ---------------------------55
I see crowds of people, walking round in a ring.
Thank you. If you see dear Mrs. Equitone, 41
Tell her I bring the horoscope myself:
One must be so careful these days.

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34 Tarot: The Queen of Cups, representing the femme fatale; the card shows a Belladonna, or “beautiful lady,” as a Lady of the Rocks, sitting with rocks at her feet, a la Leonardo da Vinci, Virgin of the Rocks (1486).  Belladonna is also another name for the poisonous nightshade plant.

35 Tarot: The Three of Staves shows a man at the water’s edge looking out to ships at sea, representing enterprise, commerce and discovery.  This is the Fisher King (see note 2).

36 Tarot: The Wheel of Fortune card represents cycles of change, e.g., winter to summer.

37 Tarot: The Six of Coins shows the one-eyed profile of a merchant giving coins to those around him, representing money, gratification and vigilance.  See line 209.  

38 Tarot: The blank card, often regarded as an extra card, reflects Madame Sosostris, a caricature who tells and cries out “Look!” but is forbidden to see beyond the crowds of people in the unreal city around her (lines 54-56, and 60); thus, here “clairvoyance” is fraudulent; compare Tiresius, “not indeed a ‘character’” (Eliot’s note at line 218) who is blind but can see and even perceives and foretells (lines 218-229).

39 Frazer (see note 2): Eliot’s Hanged God is Artemis, the goddess of fertility who is annually hanged in effigy; alternatively, this is the other who walks beside the disciples (line 360), and whom Madame Sosostris fails to find.  In the Tarot deck, the Hanged Man represents self-sacrifice and life after death.

40 Tarot’s King of Cups shows a floating king holding a sceptor and chalise, representing rule by quiet strength.  This is the Phoenician Sailor who will meet his death by water.  

41 Mrs. Equitone is ostensibly a more even-visioned person than Madame Sosostris; compare Tiresius’s lover, who, after Tiresius leaves, “smoothes her hair with automatic hand, / And puts a record on the gramophone” (see lines 255-256).

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H.  The Reader’s Brother: Seeing the crowd

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Unreal City, 42                ---------------------------60
Under the brown fog of a winter dawn,  
A crowd flowed over London Bridge 43, so many,
I had not thought death had undone so many. 44
Sighs, short and infrequent, were exhaled, 45
And each man fixed his eyes before his feet.  ---------------------------65
Flowed up the hill and down King William Street,
To where Saint Mary Woolnoth kept the hours 46
With a dead sound on the final stroke of nine. 47

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42 Cf. Charles Baudelaire, Les Fleurs du Mal: Les Sept Vieillards  ("The Flowers of Evil: The Seven Old Men") #93 (1867):  “Fourmillante cite; cite; pleine de rêves, / Ou le spectre en plein jour raccroche le passant. (Swarming city, city full of dreams, / Where the ghost in broad daylight accosts the passerby.)”  The City is the popular name of oldest section of London, primarily including the financial district; see also lines 180, 207 and 260.

43 The crowd flows over the bridge, then flows up the hill and down the street, with no mention of any water flowing below the bridge and only a brown fog above them; this reflects the unreal barrenness of the city, but it also suggests there is something beyond the image of lifeless city workers: a metaphor, perhaps, for the flow of dead and injured soldiers coming homeward after the war.

44 Cf. Dante, Inferno, III. 55-7 (ca. 1321): “si lunga tratta di gente, ch’io non avrei mai creduto che morte tanta n’avesse disfatta (...a long train of people, so many, I had not thought death had undone so many).”  See also III. 35-36: Dante is standing before the gates of hell, seeing “the melancholy souls of those who lived withouten infamy or praise.” 

45 Cf. Dante, Inferno, IV. 25-7: “Quivi, secondo che per ascoltare, non avea pianto, ma’ che di sospiri, che l’aura eterna facevan tremare. (Here was no lamentation, or none that could be heard, but only sighs, sighs that made the timeless air tremble.)See also Eliot, Four Quartets, Little Gidding II.60-61 (1943): “The death of hope and despair, / This is the death of air.”  This line derives from Heracleitus, On Nature (ca 475 BC): “Fire lives in the death of air; water lives in the death of earth; and earth lives in the death of water.”

46 St Mary Woolnoth is a London Church at the corners of Lombard and King William Streets.  The church was rebuilt after the Great Fire of 1666, but a religious building has been on the site for over two thousand years.

47 A phenomenon which I have often noticed.  Nine is the hour of Jesus’s death, the start of the workday, the final circle of Dante’s Hell.

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I.  Stetson: Seen in the crowd

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There I saw one I knew, and stopped him, crying “Stetson! 48
“You who were with me in the ships at Mylae! 49  ---------------------------70
“That corpse you planted last year in your garden, 50
“Has it begun to sprout? Will it bloom this year?
“Or has the sudden frost disturbed its bed?
“Oh keep the Dog far hence, that’s friend to men, 51
“Or with his nails he’ll dig it up again!           ---------------------------75
“You! hypocrite lecteur!—mon semblable,—mon frère!” 52

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48 Eliot has said that Stetson does not refer to an actual person, but some have considered he nonetheless had in mind his friend Ezra Pound, who helped Eliot out as a reader and editor of this poem and earned Eliot’s opening dedication (see note 4).  Pound also had a proclivity for wearing sombreros or Stetson hats.

49 The Battle of Mylae (260 BC) resulted in a Roman naval victory over Carthage.  Now that the battle is over, the surviving sailors are grounded.

50 1 Corinthians 15: 37, 42-44 (NIV): “When you sow, you do not plant the body that will be, but just a seed...  So will it be with the resurrection of the dead. The body that is sown is perishable, it is raised imperishable; it is sown in dishonor, it is raised in glory; it is sown in weakness, it is raised in power; it is sown a natural body, it is raised a spiritual body...”  In a Christian tradition said to have begun in the Moravian Church, Easter Sunrise Service is held in a churchside graveyard called “God’s Acre,” where the bodies of the dead are “sown as seed.”  Thus, this Burial of the Dead section ends where it begins, with the possibility of stirring dull roots in spring.  The reader’s brother remains uncertain, though, and still perceives the season’s cruelty; he closes the section with lines that are all earth, no air or water and only the faintest hint of fire in his final questions and exclamations. 

51 Cf. the Dirge in Webster’s White Devil: Call for the robin-redbreast and the wren, Since o'er shady groves they hover And with leaves and flowers do cover The friendless bodies of unburied men. Call unto his funeral dole The ant, the field-mouse, and the mole, To rear him hillocks that shall keep him warm And, when gay tombs are robb'd, sustain no harm; But keep the wolf far thence, that's foe to men, For with his nails he'll dig them up again.”

52 V. Baudelaire, Preface to Fleurs du Mal: “But among the jackals, panthers and chimerae, ...The monsters yelping, shouti ng, grunting, crawling / In the ill-famed menagerie of all our vices / Is one more ugly, evil, fouler than the rest / ...And it is Boredom! / Eye laden with involuntary tears, / Dreaming of scaffolds, pulls upon its pipe / You know it, reader, this delicate monster - / Hypocrite reader, - my likeness, - my brother!

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