What travels through our way of making sense
—a bit—of who we are and what we do,
we chart into morality, existence,
ethics left and right, what we see as true;
then, besides the making sense, we stumble
into skirmishes on and off the chart.
I may be talking Syria, in humble,
vain conclusions that don’t know how to start;
no man’s an island, though—distant bells still
toll for me. Common, human dignity
compels the coloring of lines that will
vary red and powder blue, black and green,
and yellow—the
native hue of non-resolve
when nothing’s safe
and common sense dissolves.
Yet must the ‘human’ be with dignity—
the asphalt terms so set? In walks my dog
takes me along, we talk about this theme,
the dignity of listening to God,
ourselves, the background noise, then doing what
we please. He’d start to run, I’d call a halt,
he’d stop and start to run. I’d holler that
a line’s been crossed; he slows and knows his fault
and circles back to normal paths. He sniffs
a thing or two. I smile despite myself
that training dognity would only miff
the greatest minds: those prone to deal in stealth.
In widening gyres
we have mere anarchy;
in homeward paths we sniff our dognity.
Dear Dan, in challenging our dignity
ReplyDeleteYour poem doesn’t make much sense to me,
But since sense is a word that you’ve repeated
I feel compelled to sniff through what you’ve meted.
I, too, have talked things over with my dog
And even tried to make him rhyme with God
But what dogs have to do with Syria
Perplexes me, and maybe it is here ya
Confuse me most: I don’t know what you mean
By red, black, yellow, powder blue and green.
The colors of the Syrian flag, combined
With shades of Israel and Kurdistan?
Or blood, dirt, mustard gas, the sky, the land?
Are all these “native hues” Shakespearean?
There’s nothing American that comes to mind.
I asked my dog, but he is color-blind.
Dear Dan, your poem wants so much to be
A portal to a simpler way to see
The world around us, but it puzzles me.
Help me, brother, find my dognity.
No pun or pain intended, this dogged effort is indeed doggerel, an attempt to put to form the way Bronko retains his sense of freedom and empowerment on his leashless walks. I wanted to write about this for some time, and in Plathian mode I hunkered down the first free day I've had for a while.
ReplyDeleteBut also on my mind was the 'dignity' of diplomatic efforts from Cold War habits: Obama properly making a case for why that red line has historical cred, Putin spuriously making a case for how the UN (powder blue) could work things in Russian interest and outperform his Nobel Peace nemesis. Both sniff for other interests, and obviously I feel Obama is the smarter creature with better instincts, but naked as we all are coming to this life, I didn't really want to put too many robes on this probe.
Dogs are color-blind! I forgot that detail! The black they'd see (my effort to confound the possibility of 'black-and-whiting' most issues, especially those that call for a dignified expression); the green they wouldn't. Green is the predominant color of Muslim flags as well as the party stripes that should prevail over an endangered earth. Beyond the 'red line' and 'blue' options (UN, Russian, US versions of freedom), I hoped to denigrate such designations, a la my inchoate 'Codex Orange'.
Puppy poem that it is, and sonnets for me have run out of gas, I don't at all regret its symposium grist: let's keep threshing things out!